geography

In one part of my story Clifford Sim and his two other troop members were in their barracks. A Barrack is a Run down building or a tent looking house for the military to keep their personal belongings and also for sleeping purposes. These Barracks are for temporary uses only, so they dont live in those buildings for more than a week. This is on of the most important part of my story because Sims overheard John McCain and Joe Jackson talking about how happy McCain is to go home to his family because his wife will be having a baby soon. Later on, in my story Sims will sacrifice his life so his troop members can get back home safely and John McCain can get home to is wife and new baby.

In the end of my story Sim's troops were walking through the jungle. It was very intense and suspensful because it was very dense and you couldnt tell if there was anyone around you. So the troops couldnt tell if there was a boobytrap starting up. It was very dangerous for them.This was another scene that builded up suspense.